怎样写好英文论文的 Introduction 部分?

怎样写好英文论文的 Introduction 部分?

觉得nature的“科学家的英文交流修养English communication for scientists”课程里面说的很简洁,也很在点儿上,大致翻译如下:

Introduction 的结构:

1 背景context

2 需求need

2.1 当前有什么what we have

2.2 需要达成什么what we want

3 工作task

4 本文对象object of the document

Introduction的写作:

1背景和需求(context and need)

背景描述应该大开口,然后像一个漏斗一样把关注范围聚焦到自己的研究切入点;

目的是引起读者/编辑/审稿人的兴趣。“从来没被研究过”并不是一个好的深入研究的理由。

不要为了写背景而写背景,而应该高效地提供信息,帮助读者理解研究需求(need)和重要性(importance),尤其是研究的重要性。

可以考虑按照时间顺序来写,用recently, in the past 10 years, since the early 1990s等字眼。或者也可以按照空间/地理顺序写。

研究现状的描述用来承接背景介绍。如果其中的一个或几个研究需要用一两段文字来描述细节,应该先在introduction里面提供一个简单的思路,然后另起一节,取名为state of the art,再行仔细介绍。

最后强调研究目标(desired situation)。用but,however, unfortunately等字眼强调现实与理想的差距。

一种比较简洁的描述研究需求(need)的方式是,用一句包含需求和工作(task)的话。这句话首先包含目标(objective),然后是为了达到目标所进行的操作(action undertaken)。比如:

To confirm this assumption, we studied the effects of a range of inhibitors of connexin channels . . . on . . .

To assess whether such multiple-coil sensors perform better than single-signal ones, we tested two of them — the DuoPXK and the GEMM3 — in a field where . . .

To form a better view of the global distribution and infectiousness of this pathogen, we examined 1645 postmetamorphic and adult amphibians collected from 27 countries between 1984 and 2006 for the presence of . . .

2 工作和目标(Task and object)

把作者的工作(the task)和文章尝试涵盖的内容(the object)区分开,能使introduction更清晰。

描述工作时,

l 用we或the authors做主语;

l 动词描述研究行为:measured, calculated, etc;

l 用过去时态;

备选动词组合:

apply

We applied Laklöter's principle to . . .

assess

We assessed the effects of larger doses of . . .

calculate

We calculated the photoluminescence spectrum of . . .

compare

We compared the effects of . . . to those of . . .

compute

We computed the velocity predicted by . . .

derive

We derived a new set of rules for . . .

design

We designed a series of experiments to . . .

determine

We determined the complete nucleotide sequence of . . .

develop

We developed a new algorithm to . . .

evaluate

We evaluated the efficacy and biocompatibility of . . .

explore

We explored the relationship between . . .

implement

We implemented a genetic algorithm for . . .

investigate

We investigated the behavior of . . .

measure

We measured the concentration of cadmium in . . .

model

We modeled the diffraction behavior of . . .

描述目标时,

l 用this paper, this letter, etc 做主语;

l 动词描述交流行为:presents, summarizes, etc;

l 用现在时;

备选动词组合:

clarify

This paper clarifies the role of soils in . . .

describe

This paper describes the mechanism by which . . .

detail

This paper details the algorithm used for . . .

discuss

This paper discusses the influence of acidity on . . .

explain

This paper explains how the new encoding scheme . . .

offer

This paper offers four recommendations for . . .

present

This paper presents the results of . . .

proposes

This paper proposes a set of guidelines for . . .

provide

This paper provides the complete framework and . . .

report

This paper reports on our progress so far . . .

summarize

This paper summarizes our results for 27 patients with . . .

参考:

[1]科学网-科技论文写作中的科学 - LetPub编辑的博文

[2]Contents of English Communication for Scientists